Every night she turns on the light in her closet and leaves the closet door open exactly one inch. She arranges the pillows and stuffed animals just so, and comes to find me wherever I am in the house: stacking the dishwasher, on the loo, plotting my next Word With Friend (turns out “yids” is an acceptable word), inspecting the lines around my eyes I could swear those three were not there yesterday…
“Mom will you come kiss me goodnight?”
Every night she asks.
I smile. Say of course in a sweet voice. Or yes with a hint of exasperation. I’m tired of this question, night after night. Or I mumble okay. A word in the affirmative. Every night.
And every night, after I’ve kissed her, she asks, “Will you tell Dad to come kiss me goodnight?” Every night.
I felt, this week, that I was drowning in words. Goodnight words, request words, instruction words, necessary words, words of love and words of thanks. Ridiculous words, hopeful words, fighting words. Written words, words of encouragement, crying words, and words from faraway.
So many words. And none of them my own.
I read extraordinary essays about complicated children, and confusing experiences and thwarted relationships. I listened to the doctor tell me how to treat poison oak, and to the pharmacist promise to let me know when those meds are available. I heard about little boys who tell white lies, and big boys who make me proud, and I didn’t get to talk about her Math problem because the conference was canceled.
I cursed the man who flipped me off as he pushed me into oncoming traffic, but only in my head. And on my way back I half-heartedly tried to find him so I could remind him a Stop sign means Stop even if you’re in a hurry, and that speeding cars and crashing glass can break my bones but giving me the bird will not harm me… but of course he had safely vanished down the tree-lined street and I never got to use my words.
I thought about these lines from a poem I studied in high school, “Not Waving But Drowning”:
Nobody heard him, the dead man,
But still he lay moaning:
I was much further out than you thought
And not waving but drowning.
I wondered whether the poet, Stevie Smith, could possibly have meant the man was drowning in words. Of others. And of his own. Words that he never got to say, or think about, or write. Because he had writer’s block. Or his children’s words drowned his out. Or maybe they needed his words before he had even created them for himself.
Or because there was no one to hear when he slammed his bony elbow into the doorpost, so he whimpered “Fuck.” But only in his head.
I stood in the shower and drowned in words that were around me and on me and in me. I felt them buried in my heart and ringing in my ears. They tumbled and splashed, cascaded through my hair and clung to my eyelashes. And by the time I reached for the fluffy green towel, they had slooshed down the drain.
I have been drowning in words. I wished they were my own.
“Will you tell Dad to kiss me goodnight?” she calls softly to my retreating back. I sigh. Yes.
We pass each other in the doorway to her room. His brown eyes lock with my green ones. He smiles. I smile back.
Sometimes, no words are the lifeline you need.
With love and deepest gratitude to Jena Schwartz for giving me a space to hold onto my words, even as they sloosh down the drain. Inspired by the poem “Not Waving But Drowning” by Stevie Smith:
Nobody heard him, the dead man,
But still he lay moaning:
I was much further out than you thought
And not waving but drowning.
Poor chap, he always loved larking
And now he’s dead
It must have been too cold for him his heart gave way,
They said.
Oh, no no no, it was too cold always
(Still the dead one lay moaning)
I was much too far out all my life
And not waving but drowning.
You have such a gift. This is beautifully written. I was carried back to the never ending nights when my daughter had to say goodnight to 47 different things before I could come into her room for the final goodnight. Should I interrupt her she had to start all over again …. So many nights I just wanted her in bed. Asleep.
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I know it’s ritual and it brings her comfort as her day ends and she transitions to a hopefully peaceful night’s sleep… but but but! You get it. Thank you Kelly.
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Wow, I get this so much. (Maybe it’s the four kids that makes me relate even more.) I have a list of ideas a mile long and they get fleshed out into longer pieces ever. so. slowly.
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Nina, don’t you find there is never a moment of silence with all those voices? I don’t want to silence any particular one of them (well maybe I do), but the collective, oh the collective… no room to think!
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Oh Nicki, this is spectacular. Just what I needed to read, as sometimes, other’s words of struggle and vexed thought are comforting in reminding us that we’re not alone. I thought my ears would bleed and then fall off this morning on the drive to school, such was the deluge of little boy words washing over me. I hope you find some quiet space for you today- for your own thoughts and reflections and move towards stasis and words! In admiration, emily
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Thank you, Em, for your beautiful words. Here and everywhere. The space has blessedly returned with this post and I am so grateful! Sometimes we need the deluge to propel us somewhere, anywhere xx
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“Words! Words! Words! I’m so sick of words!
I get words all day through;
First from him, now from you!
Is that all you blighters can do?”
Made me think of My Fair Lady. So beautifully expressed Nicki. Indeed they come like an unending barrage – exposed on every level to demands and radio and print and social media. Sometime I long for stillness. One of my favourite psalms says. Be still and know that I am God. Thanks for making me stop for a moment and tune out the words. X
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Oh I love that line from your favorite psalm. Going to be reaching for that one often. Thank you Terry!
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I’m so grateful you held onto these words, Nicki. They bring me comfort. And while I know my interpretation is too literal, I have the most words of my own in the shower, and I have a notepad in there to capture them before they swoosh down the drain.
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Your interpretation is not too literal – it is exactly that, you know! That is a great idea, the notepad, but (forgive my ridiculous question!) is it waterproof?!
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Yes it is! It’s called AquaNotes, and you can get a pad on Amazon for under $10.
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Wow. You know how you read something and wish you wrote that? I finally sat down to read blog posts tonight and yours was the first one. Talk about setting the expectations high for the rest of the evening. Ironically, or maybe not, I have no words. xoxo
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That is how I feel when I read your words, Katia! Wow… thank you for this. I am in full and deep appreciation of no words xxx
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Oh, Nikki! I am on the train home after a long day filled with others’ words. I so so get this. It is such a gift to others to witness their words. To hold them and hear them. And also, sometimes, we wish it were our turn!
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Yes! Thank you for getting it. That feels like a gift too.
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Love love love you and am so glad I clicked over here before heading up to bed tonight. You took what you did at Jenna’s and made it even more incredible than it was there – and it was incredible there. I will sleep under a blanket of words tonight and will hope that they are ones of yours, that I’ve chosen to hang onto and not the ones I turn away from. You’re fucking amazing.
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That space Jena creates for us is truly a wonder… I am so glad I am in it with you. ❤ ❤ ❤
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Here by way of Kristi ^ (Finding Ninee). I do wonder- was U2 inspired by this poem when they wrote “Drowning Man”, on the War album?
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Wow… never thought about that. Now I’m wondering too. Thank you for coming by! Any friend of Kristi’s is a friend of mine.
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Nicki, that’s beautiful. Your words – no matter how they feel like they’re drowning you – when they spill onto the page, are just beautiful xxx
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Thank you darling Briony xxx
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